Andy-Reid and Noah-Jason
Andy: I in the war It feels like everything leave my body as I feel pain
Noah: I feel your pain we have been here for a bit now
Andy: as I started to go I get shot I feel this pain in my shoulder I see blood
As I look at my friend he says:
Noah: do not worry my friend we will be ok
Andy: But they so many of them
Noah: we have our special weapon A TANK
Andy: But I pain in every side on my body
Noah: do not worry me friend we have a medic
as the medic runs off to help Andy The medic helps Andy easily
It is just a short one. I fond it really hard because we are in quarantine.
Hi Jason, Nice piece of work from you and Reid. What did you find difficult about this piece? You writing was easy to read and set out well. I'm interested in whar comes next. Keep it up. Sharron
ReplyDeleteHi Jason,
ReplyDeleteA great start Jason. You and Reid have started to incorporate the emotion the men must have been feeling. Are you working collaboratively on this each day? I look forward to seeing where you two take this story.
Mrs Gibson